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Minted

Silver facades

stamped with

trust's profile

in tradition's worth.

 

Neglecting to check

opposite image,

discovering,

heart's coinage,

two faced slug.

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prompt - other side of the coin

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  • going nowhere
    February 5, 2008
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    whoa.. didn’t expect that ending… well done with the sad image you portray here.


  • thepoetssoul
    February 5, 2008

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    This is a great penning indeed.
    Filled with great imagery and truth
    Originally fantastic BRAVO!!!
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    This is rather dark and very sad...sometimes we forget about the other face which can cost us dearly...lovely imagery and metaphor...
    Best to you!