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A Soldier's Prayer ( a poem for Geoffrey)

He lies alone beneath the stars
On the shifting desert sand
Whispering a soldier's heartfelt prayer
As he touches his wedding band
He can hear his Angel's gentle voice
On the hot dry desert wind
He closes his eyes to hold back the tears
And he asks the Lord again
"Watch over my little boy and girl
Sleeping half a world away
And give my wife the strength she needs
To guide her through the days
I know my mother worries Lord,"
He prays into the night
"Lord give her some assurance please
That I'll come home alright
And send them all the love I feel
Till I come home again
And hold them in your gentle care
In our saviours name, amen

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For my son Geoffrey who I love and miss very much. We are all counting the days till you get to come hme.

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  • SadmanJim
    March 19

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    Absolutely poignant, heartfelt, beautiful and perfect. I wish I had more time to read today, but the job is calling.
    Peace to you Mary, and God Bless you.

    Write On!
    jIM


  • JohnnyD gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    lovely, simply lovely, what branch is he in???? It is so difficult for a mother to have a son in harms way, so very difficult and heart breaking at times.

    len


  • gullionmar
    February 8, 2008

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    very beautiful

    wow what a beauitful prayer for your son,very beautifully written with heartfelt compassion of a mother.i to prayfor the safe return of all of our troops,please tell your son thank you for serving our country and that he truly is a hero i teach my 11 year old to say hello to every veteran we see and he salutes them on his own.i to have written poetry for our troops, if you would like to read themstop by my page gullionmar if you wish you may print copies of them and send them to him and his friends to let them know we really do love n pray for them all to come home safe again beautifully written poetry


  • broncotwister
    February 8, 2008
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    I feel you...

    I'm a Marine stranded all the way across the country from my girl, and while I can't begin to imagine what it must feel like to be overseas from your loved ones, I know what it feels like to be apart from those you love. I hope all your prayers are answered, and God Bless you and your son.

    Pfc James McAmis, USMC

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    February 8, 2008
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    A sincere soldiers prayer,may all of his prayers be answered. Many blessings.

  • Angel Shelton
    February 6, 2008
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    ur the best, we love u mom.

  • Angel Shelton
    February 6, 2008
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    i love this one too,

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