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Catch You on the Flip-side

Our life,
    tossed into the wind;
           
Spinning endlessly untill
    final impacting moments.

Lost, you wander aimlessly
    on the darker side.

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PROMPT: 'the other side of the coin'
20 words.

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  • going nowhere
    February 5, 2008
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    leaves me with an empty feeling… wandering aimlessly. well written. thank you for your entry.


  • Dalaney gold member
    February 5, 2008
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    been there...
    love short poems with impact...this is good.
    Love, lane