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Passing away

I still remember what it felt like
when I got the news that day
it was true but I couldn't believe
that you really went away

tears I started to cry
coming down like a flow
as we couldn't say goodbye
and fate is so unkown

 

I felt abandoned, and deeply scared

I can't go on, I'm almost dead

it's getting harder, harder than ever

when you are gone, my lovely friend


missing the days we laughed
as we talked and shared thoughts
and the times you were near
I truly miss them lots 


though left out is hard to be
your presence I can still feel
and everytime I recall that day
all memories come back to me

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  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    October 10, 2008

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    I love the words in this poem.. I really understand how you feel.. I felt as you did as I stood by my friends hospital bed holding his foot wishing we could have made his last few hours or that day the best one ever.. Gr8 work..


  • Ell13
    February 5, 2008
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    yea ur're right
    may his soul rest in peace... miss him much. I hope he's in a better place right now


  • shimoPal
    February 5, 2008
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    wow.... i miss him more but this is life... RIP

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    oh my, this is sad, when one leaves this world, we know it is better that what we have, sorry for your loss, but remember the good times..MM

    • Ell13
      February 20, 2008
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      thank you MoonsShadow
      and yes, I'll always remember the good times

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