When hells wrath
clashes
with heavens glory.
Eternally
the angels will cry.
When an angels innocence
becomes
a demons malevolence.
Morphing;
the world becomes a lie.
When an angel
spares
no more life.
When an angel
deserves to die.
Author notes
15 lines pic prompted.
A contest entry
- Image Inspired, 15 poets, 15 Lines by Dutch Doll.
725 points, ended February 7, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Love the idea
Have one with the same concept. Angels/Demons opposite sides of the same coin. A good spin on the battle of good and evil. Thank you for your crtique. Lines 1-3 is good start
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Very nice write! Wonderful flow and a very powerful meaning, love the second stanza... thank you for entering... good luck
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Great write... I love the angle you approached this with. Best of luck in the contest.
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whisper
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