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Loving You

loving you is endless
vast like the sea
loving you is exceptional
my soul soars to the clouds

loving you is like the sun
hidden by the clouds shy and daring
loving you is like loving a world
ia a paradise where it's only you and me

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I wrote a poem for about picture one in the contest for new members

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  • Tortured Poet
    February 5, 2008

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    aww

    this is a very short and sweet poem, like the kind you would put in a Valentines day card. I can tell this was probably for someone very special!