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Ah! I am in love!

the wind has found a name
to whisper, as it passes me by!
the rustling leaves have a tune
to whistle, as they lightly fly!

the sun seems to shine
brighter this day!
the lilies are in full bloom
as if it were May!

the moonlight gently
sends its caresses
while the stars naughtily
wink behind their cloudy tresses!

the raindrops seem
to dance with glee
just like the fluttering
heart inside me!

everytime his eyes meet mine
i feel a connection- intense, divine!
even nature knows my secret sweet
and conspires often, to make us meet!

ah! now i lie in a dreamy alcove
ah! now i am.......in love!
ah! now i am in love!
ah! i am in love

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  • scarlettohara
    February 11, 2008
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    thank you........ i'm really glad you liked it


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 8, 2008

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    ah! now i lie in a dreamy alcove
    ah! now i am.......in love!
    ah! now i am in love!
    ah! i am in love

    just beautiful compostion ..well done....