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One Last Miracle

I have used my strength for mankind
No miracles left over to use,
Poetdontkowit was the last on my list
I've granted her dream of becoming an angelic muse.

For her destiny, has given her pen life
Her soul yens to publish a book,
She has earned the right for my last feat
So please read her pennings, go take a look

As I lay my head down in my last moments
My heavenly wings, dropping feather's one by one,
Time for me to get back where I belong
For my father, is calling back his weary son.

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2-5-2008
POETDONTKNOWIT

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  • Liquid memories
    February 5, 2008

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    well done to the prompt. love the flow here. success in the contest


  • Dutch Doll
    February 5, 2008

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    Very beautiful poem Graceful and exquisite.
    Thank you for entering

    blessings
    adriana


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 5, 2008

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    Interesting take on the picture.. very sweet and tender. Best of luck in the contest.

    ♥
    whisper


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    February 5, 2008

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    Wowee, this was a touching write. Telling a sad tale in ways lol, but I felt the hope


    Cindy