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All is Lost

When all is lost
And the world gives in
To a sweet sounding
Tempting sin
Somewhere above
Be it heaven or not
A lovely being
Begins to rot
In all the pain
They can not cry
As the world goes on
With one large sigh

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  • Liquid memories
    February 5, 2008
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    deep thoughts on the prompt.


  • Mojave Moon
    February 5, 2008

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    I really liked the flow of this, rolled right off the tongue, very nice poem, thanks for entering

  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 5, 2008
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    Nice take on the picture prompt. Best of luck in the contest.

    ♥
    whisper

  • Dirty and Broken
    February 5, 2008

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    i love this....my favorite part is "Somewhere above
    Be it heaven or not
    A lovely being
    Begins to rot"