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Fallen angel

Head buried in her arms
Delicate fingers wipe away
Her tears that flow on
Like an endless river

Wings tucked in, trapped
Not flying in the clear blue sky
But weeping under the dull grey clouds

Her magical halo lost its touch
Stopped glowing under the sunlight
Gleaming brighter than the sun
But now it’s darker than the night sky

Fallen from heaven to bless us
A confused and heart-broken angel
Seeking to find a helping hand
That’d mend her scarred heart

A contest entry

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    March 23, 2008
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    Thank you for your wonderfully penned entry, good luck, Josie

  • robb-
    February 12, 2008
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    wow.
    what can i say?
    words can't begin to scribe the elegance of this poem
    great job


  • Dutch Doll
    February 5, 2008

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    Very beautiful, sadness penned with such aptitude. thank you for entering my contest. Goning to be a touch one to judge!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 5, 2008

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    I think you captured the picture well. Best of luck in the contest!


    whisper