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Lover's gaze

Sitting there in silent hours,
feeling love's tumultous powers,
we lie awake at night.

Gaze into each other's eyes-
free of guilt and sin and lies
knowing things are right.

The eyes can do this special thing-
portal to the souls desiring
to look past normal sight.

Through this glass we see the soul,
the heart, the mind- all in full-
Feel safe, to hold each other tight.

For seeing now we know each other,
know the truth of one another-
and kiss away the night.

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  • passim silver member
    February 6, 2008
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    A beautiful poem of love. This fitted the prompt very well. Thank you very much for entering.


  • Abby Apathy. silver member
    February 5, 2008
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    beautiful! best of luck.

    Abby