Me and you
You and me-what difference does it make
We're together-forever?
That's what I hope for-the thrill of you touching me
I used to ride the farris wheel-but all alone
And the ride is too coupley for just one
Now you are here with me
We have so much more ahead of us
Than just coupley farris wheel rides
Now that I'm here with you, I think I've decided
Do you think you can take it?
Does it still hurt
Remember, you can't take it all away( the pain I mean)
I never aked you to
So good morning
And don't forget to write it down
Don't forget to feel
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Comments
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I liked the image of the lonely ride and then finding someone to be with you, yoy really captured the sadness and then gave a ray of hope to all us single riders out there. I liked the way this really seemed to give a snippet of life and I really enjoyed reading it, thanks for posting. Nice Job x
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ahhh... a good read.
Touching, I know what you mean "Riding the farris wheel alone", happened to me all the time. I see what you are saying clearly, keep it up. 10/10
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