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Rejuvenation

Missing image



faith not lost,
just suppressed,
exhausted emotions
sting her heart

clinging to her altar
she weeps
for rejuvenation



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  • Synraven
    April 6

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    Short and sweet

    I'm definitely in that phase of my life. You live and you learn I suppose. The piece is a solid reminder to myself that I am not the only one that goes through life's roadblocks, and I must find a way not to lose hope and carry on.


  • Charity Ann
    February 13, 2008

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    I read this before I looked at the photo and was thinking "huh?" Then I scrolled back up to the pic and it all clicked like that tiny switch that illuminates a dark room. This is fantastic! Very beautiful and a terrific depiction of that sad and gorgeous statue. Thanks for entering and good luck!

  • Liquid memories
    February 5, 2008

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    wow, such depth you have shared. very fgood.


  • Dutch Doll
    February 5, 2008

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    this really describes the picture, very beautiful choice of words, thank you for entering

    blessings
    adriana


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    this is such a beautiful and yet effective piece that drips with beautifully expressed words. well done hun


  • Tarja
    February 5, 2008

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    Simple but elegant. This was really amazing... so much was accurately expressed about the picture through so few words. Fantastic job, good luck!

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