All colours of the rainbow merge into the White Light
The Light of Life
Divided they are unique
But misinformed they cause strife
All Life is connected and a part of the Greater One
The Holy One of Eternal Love
When dark clouds surround us
Seek out the White Dove
Settlements named and segregated with lies
Tongues and symbols confuse the reptilian
Remember once when we were amphibian
And reached perfection in mammalian
Colour so bright so dark so pure
Colour isn't worth fighting for
Colour is a means to be sure
Colour combined leads to the Open Door...
Red White and Blue makes a strange hue...
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She comes in colors everywhere.
Shes like a rainbow.
The second verse is a masterpiece.
That is not to say least of the others.
But I think you have a way with placement.
So many times I will look at my work,
and in my mind,
I'll rearrange the verse.
The terribly sad thing is it sometimes works to well...lol
Now dont think me a loon,
but I have done the same with yours on this piece.
and the way it was written, the succession, the kreshendo...it is perfect...along with the grand culmination ...
....Colour combined leads to the door....
Where in my mind,that leads to the white light,
..Colour isn't worth fighting for...
This piece says much my brother,
great great job again.
blessings always,
LOWELL POE.
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BRAVO, INDEED IT DOES, VIBRANT COLORS THAT PULL YOU TOWARDS THE DOOR EXCELLENT WRITE GOD BLESS
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