In the car, i love to ride
Just my master and me
Winding roads, open space
We head down to the sea
Wind blows ears behind my head
And lips up to my eyes
City left far behind
It's day out for us guys
Ladies stop and pat my head
They want to scratch his itch
It's guys day out, we have a deal
We each get our own bitch
Satisfied and happy
We make our way back home
City life awaits us
Till next time do we roam.
Author notes
Witten from a dogs view ...roah rrye ripss
A contest entry
- roah rrye ripss by Applehead.
1000 points, ended February 19, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hehe this sounds like a lovely day out for a group of err lovey dovey hound dowgs
Well done and thank you for entering.
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Thankyou for the bronze it was a fun contest only wish more had entered, all the best with your next one, i look forward to it...Be well
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Nice and visual, I like it
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Thankyou very much Be well
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Yes that is truly a dogs day out isnt it so happy for just the simplest of things well done getting into the head of the pooch
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I had fun writing this, thanks for the comment
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hahaha very creative
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It was fun to do
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