My love, to soon were you taken from me.
I cannot fathom my world without your smile;
without such a light, no bird could be inspired to sing.
Never again will I feel the warmth of your hand
upon my cheek.
Never again will I gaze longingly
into your crystal eyes.
Why would the Lord take you away so suddenly?
Such a life as pure as yours
should never have ended like this.
I stand here with my ribbon, and my flowers,
hoping that you can see me from above.
Do you see me, my love?
I have fallen upon your grave and I do not think
that I could ever bring myself to leave.
A contest entry
- Image Inspired, 15 poets, 15 Lines by Dutch Doll.
725 points, ended February 7, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Intresting, its a different take on the picture than most and I like it! Good job, keep up the good work!
-xNightxOfxAgonyx -
Well... still has that depressing vibe, BUT you did take my advice on less blades and cuts.
Nice start.
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Very sad feelings here
Great take on the image,
thank you very muc for entering, good luck
blessings
adriana
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