She loved so pure, So honest, and true,
'Twas a love
To make Angels weep.
She smiled so bright, Brought day from the night,
She held light
Made the Angels weep.
She bore a child, Bright eyed and sweet smiled,
Enough like her mother
To make Angels weep.
And when in her child bed, She lay down her sweet head,
And closed her eyes
For the final time,
Heaven stood still, The whole world felt a chill,
And forever now, Her Angels,
They Weep.
A contest entry
- Image Inspired, 15 poets, 15 Lines by Dutch Doll.
725 points, ended February 7, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful uplifting words of love...calm while reading this...flows softly till the end. Angels are always with us..thanks for sharing
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Wow this sent shiveres down my spine, amazing job!! Good luck in the contest!
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Very beautiful words! ...not under 15 lines though
I really liked the flow and the repeditive use of "to make angels weep" thank you for entering
blessings
adriana
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