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Love

When the winds are blowing
I am feeling it brings some aroma
When there is raining
I am feeling, that is benediction
When the sun is shining
It echoes in my mind
Everywhere I am feeling to him
When I am thinking of him
It mingles in the music of my heart
Chanted by the waves of my breath

What I can tell about him
He is cool with the winds of south
Dark with the crops of the harvest
His nights rejoicing in the glory of moonlight,
His eyes are shining like
Trees in flowering bloom,
Sweet of laughter, sweet of speech
He is the giver of boons, giver of bliss

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  • rosepoet
    February 6, 2008
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    awesome write. I love it. keep the ink flowing