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Paradise

Pure with stunning beauty,

Absolutely divine,

Richness shining from it,

Angelic heavenly shrine,

Dreams come true in paradise,

Idyllic sights abound,

Scenery so spectacular,

Elegance all around.

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    a great choice of words abotu what paradise is to you..
    I just wrote a poem on spirits...I like your comment!


  • PonyPride
    February 7, 2008
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    WOW. I just love every bit of this. It had flow and everything. You did a fantastic job!!!