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awareness burden









awareness burden
to see and to understand
react with wisdom











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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    February 14

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    I get awfully prissy when it comes to haiku. This one is aphoristic, almost moralistic - you could imagine Polonius saying it, before he got impaled in the arras. OK, decision time - is it Basho or Charlie Chan? Well, count the bunnies!

  • Arzab
    February 5

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    Beautiful haiku. I liked the second line the best. It makes me think that sometimes just to know the facts of something is not enough, it's best to understand the situation from an emotional standpoint, as well. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    February 5
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    Awe-inspiring...nice one


  • Amera gold member
    February 5

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    Interesting image for a haiku. Especially thought provoking for me right now.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • michellemybelle gold member
    February 5
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    intuition gifted
    wisdom's sixth sense opened
    dream visions awake

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