Bootlicker,
whore of a man,
I am sick of your lies
and pretentious bull.
Your like shit on the bottom
of my shoe,
I can still smell the stench
of you on my lips.
You grade A prime beef bastard.
I hope you experience the pain
of being trampled by love,
and living day by day
beneath stagnant promises.
A contest entry
- Bootlicker by Naridill.
800 points, ended February 6, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - You're a heartbreaker by flyingphoenix.
475 points, ended June 11, 2008, 70 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this was sooooo angry, but it also raised a smile. Great insults! I really liked it. Angry yet funny. I know it's not meant to be funny, but the put downs are just too good!!
I particually liked the 'grade A prime beef bastard'
great emotion, great poem! thanks for entering and good luck!
Sunny
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Wow. This is so full of anger. The emotions you have towards this subject come through loud and clear.
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'whore of a man'
What a line, very intense and beautifully crafted indeed. Love the direct approach here.
Thanks for entering,
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