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early morn'
the rooster catches me
sleeping in
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I guess roosters don't really care if we sleep in or not!
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A Fantabulous Haiku Indeed! Good Job!!
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Ohh I lived on a farm for two years as a child and that rooster always came by my window. I could never sleep in, drove me mad :)) But at least I got the bathroom first :))
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Lmao
I would not be suprise dif they do or don't I like your concewpt here Haiku master. the roosters are the morning wake up call or should be but just depends how deeply asleep you are. any ways a very well penned haiku with such incredible depth and ebauty pertaining to it. keep up the nice work
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Very Good
I think this haiku is very funny. The rooster had to do a whole lot of crowing to wake you up, as you are sleeping in late.
I am not used to haiku being funny. I didn't know that was allowed. But I am pleased that this appears to be so, as you are the expert in haikus.
I too, shall try to write a funny haiku.
Thank you for your time.
BJ.
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lol... actually, haiku are very often light hearted and funny... Basho really was sort of the father of lightness in haiku but so many have followed suit. I'm very fond of humorous haiku and write them as I see them..... thanks for commenting. Very nice of you. Take care.
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This is really descriptive and it also
made me chuckle, for roosters care not
for mans timetable. good job on this
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Thanks... I just saw your comment... what the heck?... how'd I miss it?
I appreciate it.
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I love it!
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Hi Kari.... just saw these comments. I swear they weren't there a minute ago! LOL Thanks again for everything. You have been more than wonderful to me and I appreciate it.
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early birds
why the serenade?
Here they just don't sleep, start before the sun rises. Good thing they are small birds and not a bunch of roosters
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Hey Mari.... early serenade and the sound of my shotgun!!! hahahaaaaa
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HEHE No They don't care at all thats for sure. The sun rise they must crow Great Haiku Dear RedwingSpirit
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Hehe... you're right... they sure don't.... I should have taught my dog to chase him.... hahaaaa
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yes, caught...nature's alarm clock...so very nicely done here...PK
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Thanks PK.....
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lol! the rooster gave ya the old errrrurrrr!!
yep they do care as I remember trying to sleep at Grams, and those ole roosters hollering for their morning feed.. it was fun reflecting back, thank you for that...MM
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Hey MM... thanks for commenting and sharing the fun with me! LOLLL
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Early bird gets the hen
Great write, thanks
bj
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hahahaa.... yep! Thanks for coming by.
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This reminds me of the mornings at my grandparents ranch. They have a few roosters and I love that sound in the morning. It's an old fashioned and humble feeling! This was very simple and so great! Well done.
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Thanks for the great comment. I used to live on a ranch in Wyoming.... where this was a common event. LOL
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excellent~
Perfect haiku...
Only how can you sleep when the rooster is calling for you to get out of that bed
Love it
You too
Susan~~~
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hahahahaa.... I dunno, Susan. LOLL
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No they don't! Someone should
teach them some manners don't
you think? lol Great work here
and thanks a lot for sharing
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LOL.... thank you....
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