A Fool to the pain
Of a truly broken heart
You let him beat you down
From the very start
You told him that you love him
You would die for him to live
Yet your a fool to the pain
Cause all you did was give
Trust me when I tell you
No man is worth that pain
There is no fool like a fool in love
Except the players in the game
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- #41 by daviscth.
300 points, ended February 11, 2008, 13 entries
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this is one very powerful poem that you have written. You are right by all means "no man is worth that pain" how truthful those words are. it took me 6 years to come to that realization.. excellent job with this..
thank you for entering & good luck
kat
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This really has to be one of my favorite writes by you!! You nailed the rhyme and the flow..... Best of luck!!!
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A wonderfully created take on my prompt. Thanks for posting in my contest.
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this is a briulliantly worded piece that captures alot of truth in your words and made me think. well done auntie
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Brilliant write and I hope you got right out of there. No man is worth the pain, yes I can vouch for that but it took me over 40 years to realise it. Slow learner I guess. Well done and good luck with this.
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Awesome write...been there done that a couple of times and still fall in love with the wrong guys...grrr
Good luck in the contest.
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Very nicely done here!!! And your words just speak volumes my friend!!! You totally knocked this one out of the park
Well done and best of luck!!
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