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To Say Goodbye

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As moments steal away my time
Claiming my present, as past
I fall into your soft brown eyes
But you steal them away, too fast

I linger in your tight embrace
Lost in the beating of my heart
But just as I pull you close
It seems just then, we part

While looking at you, we separate
And silently, in my head, I sigh
Because I know, as I walk away
I don't want to say goodbye

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  • lilmama5003
    February 5, 2008
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    it was great

    It was realy good


  • Demington
    February 5, 2008

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    Wistful, full of hope yet resigned to the inevitability of choices made.

    The diction in this piece is simplistic, yet still poignant. I like the tug of war feeling that jumped out at me.

    Good stuff!