Heroes of the old west run wild
Over the mountains of their birth
Riddled in the tales of time
Showing our children the divine
Each horse was a god in their own way
Surviving through these times, watching the colts play
Author notes
i hope this is ok ?
goodluck judgeing
A contest entry
- Accrostic Poems Please! Come on guys! by PonyPride.
500 points, ended February 18, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This was a nice acrostic, with good rhyming! You weren't just horsing around!
Good Read,
David
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95%
wow I really enjoyed this, it was excellent. I loved the pic! Everything was very poetic except for the very end. It just lost the full passion you brought forth. Good job -
wow sis this is such a stunning piece and i love the acrostic that you have written it really portrays the images well done
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