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Happy Birthday Grey Mouser! xoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxo

Gentleman and sweet, sweet friend; I

Regard you as one of the finest people

Ever to grace my world and heart with

Your compassionate witty words and

Magnificent poetry, painting rich hope

Onto the canvas of my soul and prayers

Uttered by you always bring me peace!

So on this special day, YOUR birthday, I

Especially want you to know how much I

Respect and love you and your golden heart!















Happy Birthday!!!

I love you sweet, sweet mouser!

Thank you for the joy, comedy, poetry and prayers you have shared with me...

your presence makes my world far richer and I thank God for sending me an angel like you to brighten my world!

First you ‘cracked’ my shell and I fluttered free and today I continue to fly with your courage tucked neatly beneath my wings!

Without YOU ... I would not be me!

May today and the upcoming year be filled with love, laughter, health and happiness!

I LOVE YOU TO THE MOON AND BACK!

Tammy

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

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prompt: Acrostic/A loved ones name...

Grey Mouser
http://allpoetry.com/Grey%20Mouser

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  • tara wilson gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    a beautiful expression of feelings...

    I don't know him, although I just commented on a poem of his.... he sounds wonderful from your poem

    Happy Birthday, Grey Mouser...


  • PonyPride
    February 7, 2008

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    nicely written. you put a message into a poem however I do not really like your form. This peice seems more sentece in line rather than poem. But it is not your work I am not fond of but this style.


  • QuarryGirl
    February 6, 2008

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    Wonderful, Wonderful. What a great brithday gift, and wrapped in an excellent piece of writing. This is not at all forced to fit the name, (no small feat)and flows so well that you notice the Accrostic second to the words. Excellent Tammy, and a happy birtday to GreyMouser. Love Ya, Roll Tide.. Sandra


  • Grey Mouser
    February 5, 2008

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    Truly golden!!

    Awwwww, my dear Honey Nut, you are a true blessing and I am so very happy to have you in this life. For you have a light that far outshine smine and have been a true and magnificent joy to me and your lovely sis. To all your other friends and beyond, you give such wonder and amazement with your art.
    This is a wonderful treat to receive as I signed on, thanks ever so much my dear Tam.
    Love you around the moon and across the galaxy.
    xoxoxoxoxoxoxox


  • Mirthryl
    February 5, 2008

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    Lovely acrostic for a cherished friend, and so timely for a birthday!

  • Rowan gold member
    February 5, 2008
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    you are the sweetest person on site...


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    And your love shines through to a beautiful friend and support system we share here on AP...sis, you did a wonderful job saying so much about the beauty that is his soul...
    Happy Birthday Dave...
    Love ya both.
    Kim


  • Stardust-luvr
    February 5, 2008

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    well done for our dear brother - you mastered this well for I couldnt have done better -lol lol he his my brother and has been a true anger to my spirit over the last few months. love him to bits. xooxox


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 5, 2008

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    What a beautiful tribute to Gm on his special day. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of poetic art with me... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    February 5, 2008

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    this truly has to be one awesome birthday dream come true for this poet! to have Miss AP Princess to honor him in this way...must be the utmost priviledge!!

     

    Happy Birthday Grey Mouser!!!! I wish you blessings on your very special day!!!

     

    GBY:)
    *rose*
    SilverButterfly

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