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Thoughts Hidden

Let my eyes
gaze upon sensations
of you, lost in an overload;
mind-numbing of satisfaction.

To reach within depths,
contorted into pleasures;
a mirage only seen in dreams.
Where sleepless nights control,
holding moments of freedom;
and I will close my eyes to see.

Let your lips
caress my soul;
soft in spoken words.
Whisper to my heart...
I will hear.
And your gentle touch-
a longing left burnt into flesh;
waiting imprints
scorched forever to the core.

With tender ears,
listen...
the beating of my heart,
the life of my spirit...
they call;
beckoning you to know
thoughts hidden.

And with gentle fingers,
words delicately sprawled
upon pages,
may you see.

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  • Polaja
    February 28

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    Hood-Winked!

    I see that this answers my question in my last comment! You have written this wonderfully... you have a beautiful way with words - I loved the last stanza - it was a sigh of perfection

    Keep writing

    Polly

  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    February 5
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    Whoa! This is beautiful and very sensual. I really like this poem and background, Storm.