They ask me what you are to me,
and I cannot add up the words.
When I think of you,
I see images of feeling.
What you are to me is whole,
strong and not fragile.
You've melted into a pure being,
holding my life in your grasp,
ever so softly, ever so lovingly.
What you are is an answer,
a meaning so powerful.
You once were my wish,
now I find that it is true.
You are a collection of essence,
you hold a heart that moves me.
No song would be enough, no notes adequate,
to sing of the joy that seeps from within.
You've spun yourself inside me,
like strands of silk.
Holding my heart within your web,
weaving me; weaving an us.
We do not look the same,
but we are the mirror
of one another.
Our love says so much more,
than a thousand words ever could.
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Heavenly!
This poem flows so smoothly and the choice of words is unique and elegant. I love "we do not look the same, but we are the mirror of one another" - fantastic! -
hey thanks for the comment love is a beautiful thing and i like to express it in words that have great meaning and make people think
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beuatiful-
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This is so very beautiful. I wished someone could feel like this about me. Whomever this is about is really lucky. God bless you always in all that you do and write and keep up the excellent work.
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'I see images of feeling' perfect. It's exactly how I describe things sometimes.
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Awesome. Nicely done, Am glad your wish came true.
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Enjoyed
Very thought invoking piece. Hope to see more
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. Thank you for sharing.
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Awwww
This is truly amazing. You are sooo good at love poetry! And you probably never knew before she came along, tehehe ^_^ Anyhoo, the flow was great and created a dreamy love atmoshpere. You totally rock! 
Jeanette*~
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i liked this you described your emotions and everything very well in this it was a pleasure to read
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That is very moving. I am just very touched by this. It remains me of me and my gf. She has touched a place in me that no one else every had. I really like this one. Thanks so much and keep it up!
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This is quite beautiful and worthy of my love and my world, my beau
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awwwww this is so beautiful. I completely understand and relate the emotion in this. Its amazing beautifully awesome. You have sumed up completely what I'm feeling. Wonderful Job!
No song would be enough, no notes adequate,
to sing of the joy that seeps from within.
You've spun yourself inside me,
like strands of silk.
Holding my heart within your web,
weaving me; weaving an us.
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This was very sweet. Your feelings for this person were expressed so beautifully and strongly in this. I feel these same emotions for my husband so I was able to relate to a lot of your words. This was wonderful... not cliche ... so creative.
Great job.
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This is so lovely. I adored reading it. It uses wonderful emotioms within it. The feeling of love. My favorite part is:
"What you are to me is whole,
strong and not fragile.
You've melted into a pure being,
holding my life in your grasp,
ever so softly, ever so lovingly."
It's just so beautiful.
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This is so lovely. I very much enjoyed the wonderful imagery you've incorporated and weaved it; it's very nice for the mind's eye. Thank you for sharing this, and keep writing!
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Beautiful
How lovely this is, how wonderfully written.
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Great write!!!! thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!!!
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww baby this was absolutely beautiful! I love it soooooooooooooooo much!!!! This truly takes my breath away and makes me stream tears of joy
What do you do to me my looooooove? hehehehe!!!! Sorry all excited!! I really love this piece sorry keep sounding like a broken record
We do not look the same,
but we are the mirror
of one another.
That's absolutely gorgeous! I really love the way you put that angel, it really touched me so deep, goodness you don't know how happy you make me, how much you make me smile, and there is nothing I find more fulfilling than sharing entire life with you precious, when I look into your eyes I see me in them, and us and when you look into mine you'll see the same
You're my world and everything, my every breath, it has been quite a journey with us and just around the corner my baby we will be in one another's arms and continue our voyage to eternity*cries* There's is no greater blessing than you my darling and I want you to know that I will forever be appreciative of you I love you so much I can go on forever and ever about you beautiful but, no words can truly capture your meaning. I love you gorgeous!! Thank you so very much for everything my love. 
♥
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beautiful
that was stunning. you write exellent! keep it up
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