Fire man

Spirits of fire frozen in ice, downcast gaze

remembering the haze of a sunny September day...

bravest hearts of love and care
dared the blaze of hatred paused not,

for cause was not a concern - only life, only precious life.

And that most enduring memory of that unforgettable day,
some died taking lives, while others died saving life;

angels and prayers rose above bitter ash,

plumed greater than smoke and evil done;

towers fell in a day as heroes rose, eternal.

In a list

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A contest entry

SEMI-QUICKIE 10/10/in 24 Hrs. PhotoPrompt by Ithica. 600 points, ended February 5, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Ithica
February 5, 2008
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This is an eloquent tribute to the memory of those selfless men... Thank-you for entering!
Mari Goes
February 5, 2008
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Great write!
Seeking Peace
February 5, 2008

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It is a memory etched in the mind of anyone old enough to understand, an image never to be forgotten and you have given it new voice, loud and proud... sensational hun, you more than do it justice

Karen
jcat
February 5, 2008

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This was truly a moving piece you have penned!!! I am sitting in awe of your words....Truly stunning!!! Best of luck in the contest
sweetgirlwa
February 5, 2008
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That gave me goosebumps. The read was one of honest passion. Good luck in the contest