As my eyes close
A new world
Imagination
My peace and serenity
Bottled up emotions
Burst out of my heart
Suffocated screams
Despair and pain out of the open veins
A single breath
A scream for help
My imaginary world
The only escape
An abnormal state of mind
The only way I can feel in place
As my eyes open
The light burns
Author notes
the title says it all.
when I read this out loud, the ending really becomes powerful. yay.
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wonderful
Wow, I loved this. It was so powerful and I could definitely relate to it. :] Not many people are able to write with this much emotion -- and I think that's what really brings a poem to life! You are very talented, beautiful write!
<3
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G'Day Danuta
I absolutely love this. There is something so powerful in this that makes me stop and think
Fantastic write
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Thank you for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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wow thats realllyyyy goooddddd
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aww...thank you for the comments.
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wow this poem is electrifying
a strong and tidal wave poem ..this is enough to sweep many poem-readers off their chairs lol beautiful write...
My imaginary world
The only escape
this part ..mine too..i agree with it lol..
Bottled up emotions
Burst out of my heart
this part sooo nicely written lol...
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wow, this is very powerful, you do a good job of saying a lot with a few words.
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