I am
just a baby
there is so much to learn
Life's lessons needed to protect
me from predators who want to harm me
Man wants to put me in a cage
My freedom is at risk
Nature's creature
I am
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Wonderful, I love poems that look beautiful as well as read beautiful. I love this 'return the favor' option, I am always delighted every time i click it, and this was no exception.
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Just a baby, with big brown eyes.
Wanting no bars between them and skies.
How can we protect him and preserve his kind?
As we make our choices, we should keep that in mind.
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I appreciate your comment and applause
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This is a great piece and I do love a great rictameter, great flow and beautiful as well
Thanks for entering this contest, best of luck
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This is great and I feel your words are perfect for the picture...great job and good luck in the contest.
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aww very sweet, short and to the point this is adoreable
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Ok.. Julie.. we've all gone
over this...and you get the BIG BUNCH OF BANANAS award
for the cutest picture and rictamater!!
Doc.
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... cuuuuuuuuuuuuuute! How could someone cage up a little tike like that?
It's weird how he looks so young and so old at the same time. And, if you single out his hand it actually looks quite human until you reach the furry part!
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awwww me LLT
this is butiful..him sure is a lil cutie ... brill write well done ...loves ya bunches ... xxx cheeky xxx
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awww auntie this is a beautiful write and take on the picture and i love the rictameter you have used (i dont know how to use them
) best of luck
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A gorgeous pic and a great Rictameter to match it perfectly. So sad but so true.
I wish you all the best in the contest
Gaylene
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Such a cute little tacker...you have done well with this Rictameter.
Best of luck
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like it J. love the photo too....good luck in your contest..
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