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a new love for an old love

My hand

        Is upon my head
(Once again)


            Swirling.       
                       
                      Circular


Our love
(Dont give in)
Give in to me.

              Continuing


                      Eclipsing



A beginning

            Evoking
A response
            (I love you)

An idea

            (A life)
You give
To
m
e)    verytime)


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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 8, 2008

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    I love the visual this poem creates, I found my hand wanting to seek out my head... Format is cool and works perfectly for this write... I really love this!!!!

    ♥
    ♥
    whisper


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    February 6, 2008
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    Cute write...kinda got a little confusing at the end...