The love of a friend, is never convenient nor by chance.
It's direct, intense, so amazing your heart will dance.
Through pain, deep sorrow, hardened times of need.
True friends are there, to pick you up, guaranteed.
(C) Nichole A.Dustin
02/04/2008
Author notes
Contest prompt...4 lines of rhyme on love of friendship. I would like to dedicate this poem to a really good friend of mine. You know who you are punkin :-)
A contest entry
- 4 Lines Of Friendship by Vernal Bloom.
450 points, ended February 25, 2008, 22 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My mother taught me if you have nothing nice to say don't say it at all. We are not here as pros, we are here to share our art and have fun. *grin*
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Beautiful poem!
I am sure your friend must be smiling ear to ear with
delight over this beautiful dedication.
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : ))
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Congrats on the gold!
You did a great job on the prompt. A wonderful piece, summed up friendship so very well. Congrats on the gold! -
aww
thank you babe! Is this the one that is for me? If so I am honored to have inspired you to win a gold
Keep up the great work!
hugz
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A true friend is always there no matter what. What an amazing write. Excellent flow and rhyme, I so enjoyed reading good luck in the contest my dear friend
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Uplifting & inspirational!!!
Short & sweet, less is more...
So much said in so few words...
Both heartwarming & heartfelt...
Well done!!!
Really enjoyed this write...
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This is wonderful... your rhyme and flow is great. Best of luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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Hah, such a great meaning in just four lines! I was sure there are great poets around AP to compose friendship in such sweet way.. a very nice poem, indeed. I'm also glad to see you have such true friend/sister in your life.
I just thank you kindly for sharing this with us and wish you good luck in the contest
~Massy~
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Oh! How lovely this is True friendship is always there through the good times and in times of need. A wonderful poem that flows beautifully and a perfect description of what friendship means.
Best wishes~
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This is so sweet and true!
Lovely work here and good luck
to you in this contest! Thanks
a lot for sharing this thought here!
Jeremy0826
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