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Indian Dances


she swears a swearful song
along a clumsy road

Drinks a drink, (and nourishes)
a selfless hymn

                Encourages
(Life)
                            (Music)

Music is life.
A flaw of north-eastern descent

                discourage

                          (Indian without rain


(Malnourished )
eyes aglow

Swear to a truth
               
                  (She knows)
she dances


                  Circles)


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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 4, 2008

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    Perfect write, awesome baby

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    whisper