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Michael

Meandering through time,
Invaded in the most personal of ways.
Caustic love of unfettered variety,
However I came across yourself,
Although I had not truly been searching.
Elegant in speech and touch,
Loved none the less.

A contest entry

Is there anyone who'd like to school me in the art of punctuation? I tend to refrain from doing it in a vain attempt to make it less terrible.

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  • PonyPride
    February 5, 2008
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    good I liked this.. It was more poem than list. It had a little flow too... good write


  • paullallady silver member
    February 4, 2008

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    This is a very unique acrostic. Most
    acrostics use the usual descriptions
    when speaking about someone. This uses
    some very unique descriptions that made
    it very nice reading. good luck in the
    contest.