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Potential

Smoke rolls off the car hood
The wind carrying it away
A small sign of existence
The keys still in the ignition
Empty but for the scent of rain-soaked skin

Windows fogged
like breath still lingers
Small signs of personality
Litter the dash and floor
A time untold

The lights are still on
The driver and passenger doors
Left wide open
An offering
A sign

It's cold inside
Abandoned
But still with potential
Miles uncounted
A full tank

It's pouring outside
A temporary shelter
A friend, lover, companion
There are places unseen
And the rain keeps falling

It keeps failing...


Let it fall

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