Here's what I despise
To see through my very own eyes
To hear these cries
To listen to these lies
Something like love
There's no meaning to it
I can't stand it
This dark path
Do you know how much pain I've been through?
I'm actually dying inside
Don't turn around
Please don't cry...
I want to protect you
Something like love
I'll never understand it
-Airin
Author notes
the original was written by my friend Airin, but with her permission, I've adapted it.
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tell her that i like this one please
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very good very intersting i like how almost everyone could relate to this
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A very powerful emotional piece of
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