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My Valentine (Etheree)

Please
be mine
For ever
my Valentine
Let our hearts entwine
with love feelings divine
With lots of hugs and kisses
We will surely know what bliss is
One lucky dude , that is what I'll be
When your heart and your soul belong to me

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Prompt 2.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    January 31
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    Thank you for your sweet entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • trekkergirl
    January 25
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    This is very nice. And I do understand why you did this... because of the form you used. But one of the rules was to only submit left align work. Thanks for sharing this read though. It was well written. And I greatly respect anyone who can write so well in any form. Thanks for entering this into my contest.


  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008
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    Reminds me of a write I would give to my special someone. You express yourself in simple words yet the feeling beyond those words is so complex that it can capture you instantly. Excellent write.
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    Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • Jessi-desensytized
    February 14, 2008
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    thanks for your entry and good luck!


  • LoneFairrie
    February 4, 2008
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    Not quite a Halmark Holiday aspect of it but still a great write! good job

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