Contentment

Like the opening of petals to the sun
My heart awakens at the sight of your face

Such quenching of the earth does the rain offer
Thus my spirit thirsts for your loving presence

As a boat on the ocean needs the wind to pass its sails
So does your love keep me gently directed through this life

Please tell me what you think

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Blueskywonder
February 5, 2008

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A beautiful piece with lovely thoughts expressed within its heartfelt content. Great to see you're poetic beauty
- Applehead
  February 5, 2008
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  hehe thanks,thought it was about time I expreesed myself more
paullallady
February 4, 2008

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What a wonderfully emotionally
descriptive poem of love and caring.
I usually never point out misspellings,
but "sprit" should be "spirit". I only
say this is because this is so good.
- Applehead
  February 5, 2008
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  Thanks and your right and good to pick me up on typos It was a little late when i posted poem and did notice but it slipped my mind lol i should sleep more
petethemeat
February 4, 2008
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Really Ella you are too kind... Oh not about me eh? Well doesn't make it any less beautiful!