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Contentment

Like the opening of petals to the sun
My heart awakens at the sight of your face


Such quenching of the earth does the rain offer
Thus my spirit thirsts for your loving presence


As a boat on the ocean needs the wind to pass its sails
So does your love keep me gently directed through this life


 

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  • Blueskywonder
    February 5

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    A beautiful piece with lovely thoughts expressed within its heartfelt content. Great to see you're poetic beauty


    • Applehead
      February 5
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      hehe thanks,thought it was about time I expreesed myself more

  • paullallady silver member
    February 4

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    What a wonderfully emotionally
    descriptive poem of love and caring.
    I usually never point out misspellings,
    but "sprit" should be "spirit". I only
    say this is because this is so good.

    • Applehead
      February 5
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      Thanks and your right and good to pick me up on typos It was a little late when i posted poem and did notice but it slipped my mind lol i should sleep more

  • petethemeat
    February 4
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    Really Ella you are too kind... Oh not about me eh? Well doesn't make it any less beautiful!

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