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My Eros

Dusky, bass eyes
peering out from the chiseled visage
of my God of Sundown,
reigning over the Dark
in which he buries me so sweetly
and in which he comes to me
for the timbre of our kiss.

Across the lips of dreaming,
he bares his taste to me.

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Unfinished, as is the custom I'm becoming accustomed to. =P

God help me.

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  • Judith Chandler
    May 10, 2008

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    It sounds kind of finished to me but of course that's your call.

    A very sensual, mysterious piece.
    jjj

  • DarkRomantic113
    April 4, 2008
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    Very sensual. Hope you finish soon.


  • arafura gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    Sounds like this is going to be very sensual... bring it on!