Permanently carved in stone
to always remind me I am alone.
Deep black eight-pointed star
directing me to where you are.
Matters not where it points, I fear
It's there to tell me you're not here.
It tells me that you don't care.
It tells me that you aren't aware.
It tells me you don't look behind,
to see me struggling for you to find
my grasping hand outstretched for you.
It tells me that you don't care... do you..?
Please tell me what you think
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Very good piece. I love the final line.
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Oh so emotional You're such a good writer. Very good imagery and feeling.
Seems like a dream, was it? One of those "im looking for something" dreams, kind of reminds me of pocahontis as well, how she has her dream of the compass..
Anyway. much
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all-consuming emotions!
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Lots of emotion.
I like it.
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She better turn around.she better care...I'm 75% romanian i'll set her straight lol.
It tells me that you don't care.
It tells me that you aren't aware.
Wake up HUNNI!!!!
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It tells me you don't look behind,
to see me struggling for you to find
Tell the idiots to look behind please.
Let's hope yours does
Never ♥
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i feel it
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I can relate to this alot. It has great emotion on the subject of losing a love.
Samantha
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