What have I become?
This is what wishing does,
how dreaming destroys:
every second,
your beautiful face
scarred into my memory.
Too painful for words.
So they remain unsaid,
doomed to be forever thoughts.
And thoughts turn to fantasies,
moments I can never have
with you
a life without you
without you I am lost.
alone.
nothing.
and there are too many monsters here,
and magic I cannot understand,
and staying is killing me and leaving will hurt you.
I'll come back.
I promise.
When I can see past what might have been.
Author notes
Option #5. I love Jake so much.
Also, I would have entered the first round if I'd been hanging around AP more... I'm really glad this is open to everyone.
A contest entry
- Stephenie Meyer's Based Series Round 2 by LoneFairrie.
525 points, ended February 18, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TWILIGHT!!! by Heather Kelley.
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Honorable mention
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Comments
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very good
jacob black is awesome and you showed how he felt very clearly breaking dawn was I think the best twilight book lol -
very good
jacob black is awesome and you showed how he felt very clearly breaking dawn was I think the best twilight book lol -
Well, I wish I had had you in the first round, this is simply magnificant! I absolutely adored it. And you picked my favorite one for your prompt! How wonderful!
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I thought this was really cool, you really do a good job getting the point across.
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