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Love

Love is in the air
he is the one
the one I love
Love is in the air

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  • supergirl2797
    February 5, 2008

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    you nneed to ryme more i will teach you im going to thhink of a poem in to seconds
    the fat cat holds the bat going up to the base swing swing kitty made a win
    jk i dont write like that youv read my poems


  • Dutch Doll
    February 5, 2008

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    Very short and simple but very sweet.
    I really liked this lil quickie.
    nice repition

    blessings
    adriana


  • kim5519
    February 4, 2008

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    The tittle made me think it would be long but it turned out to be short sweet and simple. Its a good poem the repetition fits in pretty well.