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My thoughts on writing a poem

A poem has no right or wrong
It's a story from your heart
words that flow through fingers
as the thoughts just sort of start

Cares not for rhyme or reason
for meters or scripted ways
Based not on what some others did
Originality is what pays

Just cause someone did it
Means not you follow suit
A precious poem sequence
bears lots of heartfelt fruit

So write the poem your way
Use the words you have within
Care not to fit a pattern
Are you ready? - Let's begin

Mr. Doug

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  • strangerforeigner
    February 14, 2008

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    I really like your point of view and the way you share it, though I think there is something to be said for quality of language in poetry. Very deconstructionistic. (Like that big word? lol) Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 6, 2008

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    you write beautifully from your sweet heart,poetry is what makes you the person of who you are, keep penningfor you, sweet friend...moon


  • Ja Vorbesc
    February 4, 2008

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    Nice! Maith tu! Smoothly written, and doesn't sound forced, like oh so many rhymed poems do. Although you make me feel guilty for my constructive criticizing...