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Goodbye isnt forever

Youve held me
Youve wispered words to me
And now you leave me here
I can feel the tears rolling
but i know what you whiper is true
I will be back
and so will you
and we can be together just like before
nothing will change
except for the love that
we feel for each other
So i let go now
but just for a season
Until our return

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  • A. L. Armocido - AM
    February 7
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    Thank you for entering a fresh piece, however this really wasn't as powerful and well written as I'd like. TO win this competition you are going to have to go into the depths of your soul and write from your heart. This really was so bland and not very emotional... thank you all the same for entering though...