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Trusting Death

It's all meaningless,
just different paths
all to the same end.

Love, my mistake.
Drugs, my anesthetic.
School, my distraction.

I know nothing.
I see nothing.
I believe nothing.

It's all just one more day
and one more way
to step closer
to the same end.

And I'm too scared
to bring my end to me.
too hopeful that someone,
or something,
can show me meaning.

Because all I can trust,
all I can depend on,
all I can believe in...

is Death.

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  • Short but cute
    March 7, 2008
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    Thats so awesome! I love it! Your words are words I could never say.


  • Commonsuicide
    February 28, 2008

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    Been there, done that.....It may not get better. But just remember that there are others around that will always care.


  • Samantha Smith
    February 4, 2008
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    I think at times I can relate to this poem. Its dark and disturbing but true.

    Samantha


  • A-Sky-Lark
    February 4, 2008

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    omg, fucking love this nick, its brilliant. its..exactly how i feel. you always explain the rawness inside of me when i can't explain it myself. lol, guess we're two peas in a pod nick. *walks with arm over your shoulder in the deep end*


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    February 4, 2008

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    Whoa! EMo much. Yoou poor baby. Look I promise you things will get better.


  • Never Fall in Love
    February 4, 2008

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    nickkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.
    no.



    Never ♥

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