R omeo, Oh Romeo, Wherefore art thou Romeo?
O h how I wish you could be my hero
M y knight in shining armor tonight
A light with a love to give anyone a fright
N ever changing you chance for fame
C uring my desire for the dangerous flame
E ver wondering, wherefore art thou, Romeo?
Author notes
Romeo was the first thing that came to mind. My rhyme scheme is kinda weird its aabbcca
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Lovely Elizabethen flair to this one- addressing the subject of Romance.
Very Good,
David
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Thank you!
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I like this. I like the sentiment expressed. Was the line for N supposed to be "you" or "your". I was not sure.
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awwwwww this is a beautiful write nd i love the eway you have penned this hehe it rocks like you best of luck
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This was good but could use work.. some of the lines dont really flow... Both the overall meaning was good. Keep working with this and you could create a masterpiece. Thanks for sharing!
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