the blinding light i see
not only falls from above
it also finds reflection
amongst the tiny mirrors
amazingly unique and yet
combined together amassed
into another source until
i find no line between
the sky and earth
and all is one
A contest entry
- Wintering In The Sun by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended March 12, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - There are no small poems Only small poets! Part 2 by TheQuietStorm.
300 points, ended June 3, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh this was great! the imagery is amazing in this piece! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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The poem left me with a sense of serenity and completeness, cosmic poetry in a nutshell.
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Very interesting and unquie here....I like the way you took this. Very nice. I wish you luck!
~Kystal Angel
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I like the abstract shape that this piece, centered, does create, interesting format
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awesome take on the prompt..love how you phrased this piece. the ending line was great! simple, short and beautiful.
great work.
best of luck in the contest!
-char-
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I love it. Great Job! How come u dont comment my poems anymorre.
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sorry, i'll try to catch up, you just seemed a bit too prolific...
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