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Jackie

You mean more to me
Then the world itself
You mean more to me
Then the light of the sun

If I could be anywhere
It would be in your arms
If I could be anywhere
It would be by your side

Babe I know I say this
Everyday just hoping one day
You would say it back
And I’d be able to hear it

Babe you should know by now
I’m crazy in love with you!
I hug a computer to make you laugh
So I know you’re happy.

I wake up every morning
Hoping that we weren’t apart
I love you more then anyone else
You’re my world

You are the most gorgeous
You are the pretties
You are the most beautiful
You are more SEXY then a 100 super models!

Jackie I love you more and more
As each day passes
And that will never lessen
Cuz you own my heart forever.

What keeps us apart will soon
Disappear into nothing
We will be free together
Til’ death do us part!

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  • midnightcrow
    February 12, 2008
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    BoB i find it deep but i stand by my word

    YOUR TOO DEPRESSING

    love Crow


  • jstrauch
    February 6, 2008

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    BABY

    hehe i love it its amazing im gonna print it out when i get ink and hang it on my wall next to my bed so its almost like a lil piece of u is next to me when i sleep i love you and death wont even keep us apart


  • Tears from within
    February 5, 2008

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    Touching

    AWWW This is such a touching poem. It doesnt rhyme but still it has a smooth enough flow to it. I really like this it is deep with emtion when you say that if you could be anywhere it would be by her side or in her arms. I wish you the best of luck and I hope that you can take down the wall that keeps you apart because in the end love is stronger than anything. Wonderful write keep up the good work and God bless.
    ~Tears from within~