I feel so afraid
yet so eager inside
something tells me its ok
something keeps me behind
I feel all tingly
as fingers run up my side
I get this sensation
that Ive never felt inside
Painful yet erotic
he knows just what I need
the pain slowly goes away
he goes deeper as I start to bleed
I want to make some sound
but I hold back my scream
I can feel him all around
feels like hes about to cream
he moves a little faster
feels like I could explode
I cant keep it inside anymore
as I start to moan
He gets off of me
and lays me on my back
he puts his lips all over me
in my room that is pitch black
I lay there sleeping
after its all done
I can hear him creeping
after I made him cum.
Author notes
Yes...this is about me losing my virginity...it was a very interesting experience...and Iv learned from it since..
A contest entry
- I want a lot of poems... by love my jose luis.
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Nice depiction of the first time but I did ask for examples of what makes you ready for the next time.
If you keep relating back to the first then i would have expected it to be a bit more explosive than this.
Still each to their own.
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This is really hot and I like it... I remember my first time, but I think that now I get more turned on everytime now then I did my first time... Haha, my first time I got so nervous I almost threw up on the guy... Lol. Keep up your great writing and good luck in my contest.
~Maria -
wow
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this is hot i like
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nice
very well writen....great work...keep writing
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Very nice. Very sensual and vivid, great job!
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